Activities like puzzles and chess can have a huge gigantic effect on the child's growth and development. I firmly believe that these activities would improve our children's overall development of the body.
Firstly, Think of puzzles as some riddles which holds the key to a new door which can unlock the potential of kids by facilitating a higher level of recognizing and recollecting abilities towards any thing they establish a contact with in their life. Because of this, children would be able to easily co-relate the things with what they have seen either in the books or on the t.v etc. For instance, if a children sees a half of the face of Abraham Lincoln then he can easily identify the other half of the face without much trouble. In addition, it also help kids to recollect the numbers 1 to 10 in arithmetic and characters A-Z in alphabet by putting the numbers or characters in chronological sequence. Once children's got a good grasp of identifying and associating things with their right course of action the Second part of activity which children should undertake is Chess. It is because, chess forces children to come out of their comfort zone and make them think to form out-of-the-box strategies to decipher the opponent next move before there play so that they can defeat them by surprise and the same technique children's used them in their day to day life problem by looking at it from the different angles instead of one angle. Furthermore, Children can learn a great deal of benefits out of the above two activities based on the experiences shared in this essay.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that children's should be engaged in activities like chess and puzzles because it will bring a drastic change in their overall growth and development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, then, as to, at least, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1417.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73913043478 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50426081354 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.4067091451 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.7 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.9 20.7667163134 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.5 7.06120827912 220% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107066021102 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0424330121504 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575838001539 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0809561634729 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428388252142 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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