people today do not feel safe either at home or are out. What are the causes?whta are the solutions?
it is true that the world is in the turmoil , the unstable status has been occurring commonly worldwide, this inflicts the apprehensive psychology on residents either at home or outside. In order to cope with this phenomenon, there are several efficient solutions for this problem.
there are various reasons why people tend to be anxious when they stay at home or ouside. First, the economic recession accompanying with financial crisis remain rampant, those have been causing the misery and the poverty globally. As a consequence, the crime rate has increased dramatically for several years and hence inhabitants feel uncomfortable and nervous about their safety. Another compelling reason is that the environmental issues are becoming increasingly exacerbated, the natural catastrophes are likely to be considerably severe and brutal. The serious environmental degradation has been making massive deaths and destructions across the world. Therefore, nobody is able to guarantee what will happen in the future.
in oreder to tackle this tendency, the combination between the government and residents is of paramount importance for finding measures. From the governmental role, national leaders should manage the economy prudentially to flourish the prosperity of countries, simultaneously create thousands of job opportunities for workforce, aiming to alleviate criminals and stablize nation. In addition, people hve to raise the awareness of protecting environment as using soluble plastics which can be self-decomposed when burrying under ground instead of conventional ones, they may take advantage of the renewable energy to substitute for fossil fuels which make pollution more aggravating.
in conclusion, The unsafe state appearing amongst residents might be able to stem from offences and environmental issues. In order to address this problem, residents and the government need to co-operate assertatively to ensure stable lives for everyone.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, may, so, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1668.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.79166666667 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16996189586 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.670138888889 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.2363314049 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.307692308 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1538461538 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53846153846 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102271210183 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0331118775245 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418762626858 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0561383706685 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486367157134 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.3 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.76 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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