The migration of people to citites is one of the biggest problems facing the world's citites today.
It is widely recognized that contemporary lifestyles bring about numerous socio-economic drawbacks. Indeed,migration has been a pressing ocurring which highly debated across the globe . Although there are undoubtedly some possible causes of this trend, measures can be taken to mitigate these potential problems. This essay will attempt to identify the causes for this phenomenon, as well as present the appropriate ramifications below.
First and foremost, there would be some culprits behind this current circumstance. As is clearly claimed that only major municipalities could benefit individuals due to a more options of occupations. Scientists, for instance, this career is likely not to be feasibly flourishing in many rural areas. This is because of a lack of state-of-the-art technological developments or the inadequate quantity of professional institutes. Futhermore, education systems also contribute to this trend's causes. Urban students usually have the opportunity to acummulate a wide range of avanced knowledge in different subjects owing to the more superior teaching methods and curriculums. As a result, they tent to ''cut the mustard'' in critical thinking when studying. Later, the more chances for them to apply in some of prestigious univesities or institutions.
However, in spite of the problems, there are a number of solutions to tackle the migration problems.Perhaps one of the main solutions is to improve the quality of life in the countryside by offering better incentives and jobs from the goverments. Doing that helps attract more people to live in the rural areas. Besides, offering a good education systems in countryside regions by erecting more schools and providing distant studying courses should be taken into consideration. This can not only encourage rural students to stay in their hometown but also deliver knowledge to them.
In summary, it is true that migration has provoked negative problematic social dilemmas. However, plausible measures are suggested in the essays. In my opinion, both individuals and decision-makers must cooperate to make some alternative ways to lessen the level of migration.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, so, well, for instance, in summary, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, in spite of, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1828.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.64197530864 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29510161824 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62962962963 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 583.2 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.2198611699 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2105263158 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0526315789 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.31578947368 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0304460336411 0.244688304435 12% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00857424978313 0.084324248473 10% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0198349855943 0.0667982634062 30% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0199606375096 0.151304729494 13% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0218664196514 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.18 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 78.4519038076 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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