The best way to reduce the number of traffic accidents is to make all young drivers complete a safe driving education course before being licenced to drive.
It is true that traffic accidents have become a menace to many countries.Some governments argue that young drivers must be trained before getting driver's license.I completely agree that all young drivers must attend a driving courses in order to reduce accidents and jams.
To begin, most of the traffic accidents are caused by untrained drivers.For example, in my country, clear majority of the drivers do not know how to drive well because of lack of the knowledge of driving.Moreover, number of accidents occur due to reckless driving and violation of traffic rules.Consequently,many accidents take place on a periodic basis.Therefore, it is government's resposibility to train those drivers in order to prevent accidents.
Another point is that traffic jams are to some extent, caused by untrained young drivers.For instance, there are a lot of drivers who never attend esucational courses and they tend to make mistakes that lead to terrifying results.Also, the government and transportation authority should take into account issue of young driver's offences and necessity of training.
To conclude, training and testing drivers are good iniatiative to make the roads safer and avoid provlems later on.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1025.0 1615.20841683 63% => OK
No of words: 187.0 315.596192385 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48128342246 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.34475627654 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 176.041082164 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604278074866 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 318.6 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 46.0 20.2975951904 227% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 123.973787552 49.4020404114 251% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 256.25 106.682146367 240% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 46.75 20.7667163134 225% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 23.0 7.06120827912 326% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362426421238 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.195818814674 0.084324248473 232% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116448079334 0.0667982634062 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195818814674 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116448079334 0.056905535591 205% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.8 13.0946893788 212% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 16.33 50.2224549098 33% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.4 11.3001002004 198% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.39 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.14 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 9.78957915832 286% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.4 10.1190380762 202% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 10.7795591182 260% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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