The reading and the lecture are both about the memoir of Chevalier which contains information about his life and adventure. The author of the reading believes that Chevalier has invented many events in order to make his life seems glamorous and more exciting. The lecturer casts doubt on the claim made in the article. She thinks that the memoir was a pretty accurate novel.
First of all, the author points out that Chevalier living in Switzerland was very wealthy, however the known about him is that he has spent a plenty amount of money there on parties and gambling, the proofs on that was the amount of money he borrowed from the Swiss merchant as a loan in order to pay for the gambling and the parties.
Furthermore, the author has mentioned that the conversation between the famous writer Voltaire and Chevalier has been written after the conversation with a long time. The lecturer has defeated this point by saying that Chevalier has written every thing that he could remember after every night he met Voltaire.
Finally, the author has mentioned that the escaping of Chevalier from the notorious prison in Venice, Italy was full of a plenty number of story's. One of the story's was that he has created a hole in the ceiling of the prison using a piece of metal then climbing the roof. This previous story, has been criticized that the jailers were bribed to free him plus he got a pretty number of a politically well-connected friends in Venice who could offer a bribe. The lecture has defeated that point completely since this Jails are powerfully secured so no one could escape from it whatever, how much power he has.
In addition to, the old vanishing government has said that the ceiling would required a repairing if he had escaped from it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 261, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...life seems glamorous and more exciting. The lecturer casts doubt on the claim made ...
^^^
Line 7, column 511, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...as defeated that point completely since this Jails are powerfully secured so no one ...
^^^^
Line 7, column 609, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rom it whatever, how much power he has. In addition to, the old vanishing govern...
^^^
Line 8, column 78, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'require'
Suggestion: require
...ernment has said that the ceiling would required a repairing if he had escaped from it. ...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, furthermore, however, if, so, then, well, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 12.0772626932 124% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 22.412803532 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 30.3222958057 132% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1463.0 1373.03311258 107% => OK
No of words: 307.0 270.72406181 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7654723127 5.08290768461 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.04702891845 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47250367268 2.5805825403 96% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 145.348785872 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534201954397 0.540411800872 99% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 419.366225166 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.116997792494 855% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 21.2450331126 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.6065003449 49.2860985944 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.916666667 110.228320801 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5833333333 21.698381199 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.91666666667 7.06452816374 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.482037703963 0.272083759551 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151485677096 0.0996497079465 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585527894508 0.0662205650399 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225051975261 0.162205337803 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0721188269585 0.0443174109184 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.3589403974 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 53.8541721854 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.0289183223 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.2367328918 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.42419426049 93% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 63.6247240618 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.7273730684 84% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.498013245 114% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.