The article states that experts provide proposals to preserve Torreya tree from becoming extinct and provides three ways of support. However, the professor states that none of these proposals could provide satisfied solutions. And she refutes each of the author’s ways.
First, the reading avers that reestablish Torreya in the same location in which it thrived, such as in Florida. The professor, on the other hand, explains that this way is unlikely to success. Because such cooler and wet areas, microclimate areas, have faced strong changes that made by global warming, or wetlands become drier. So, Torreya trees would not have their favorable conditions to grow as they were in their original locations like Florida.
Second, the article claims that by using assisted migration process, Torreya trees will be relocated in another location far in the North. Conversely, the professor demonstrates consequences of one example of migrated assisted process to show how impractical to do so. she says that when humans relocated black loca trees to another place, it spread so quickly. And consequently, they killed original plants that inhabit in this place and become extinct. this unpredictable outcomes of assisted migrated process, could devastated the ecosystem in the new environment.
Third, the reading posits that preserving Torreya in research centers, with close monitoring and conducting studies will ensure the survival of the tress. The professor opposes this point by stating that this point is not a solution at all. By keeping Torreya trees at these centers, they will exposure to certain diseases. Since they do not disease-resistant, they will not survive. Also, the professor mentions that these trees need large, more genetically diverse species populations as in wilderness areas in order to thrive. Centers are not capable of doing so, and eventually will lead to these trees die on the long term.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 269, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rocess to show how impractical to do so. she says that when humans relocated blac...
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Line 5, column 456, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nhabit in this place and become extinct. this unpredictable outcomes of assisted ...
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Line 5, column 522, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'devastate'
Suggestion: devastate
...mes of assisted migrated process, could devastated the ecosystem in the new environment. ...
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Line 7, column 567, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ve. Centers are not capable of doing so, and eventually will lead to these trees ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, conversely, first, however, second, so, third, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.4613686534 48% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 5.04856512141 178% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 22.412803532 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 30.3222958057 132% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1645.0 1373.03311258 120% => OK
No of words: 300.0 270.72406181 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48333333333 5.08290768461 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.04702891845 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8355109279 2.5805825403 110% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 145.348785872 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.540411800872 111% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 419.366225166 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 13.0662251656 122% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.2602088839 49.2860985944 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.8125 110.228320801 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 21.698381199 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8125 7.06452816374 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295390884283 0.272083759551 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.093330859518 0.0996497079465 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0830090588283 0.0662205650399 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164716867894 0.162205337803 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0393402663767 0.0443174109184 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.3589403974 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.8541721854 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.2367328918 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.42419426049 110% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 63.6247240618 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.7273730684 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.