Recently published figures show that the wildlife population around the world has decreased by around fifty per cent over the last fifty years. What can we do to help protect the wildlife round the world?
According to a recent study findings, animals population has declined by approximately 50% over the last fifty years. In order to preserve them, I firmly believe that government should impose severe punishment on hunting and poaching and tight restrictions on illegal smuggling of animals around the world by working with world wide federation.
Firstly, It has become quite common in every nation where every other week media highlights the plight of animal conditions and most of them were the cases associated with hunting. In a recent study published by American scientists, it has been found that about 100,000 animals were killed in United States in the year 2016. As a result, wildlife population is declining at a rapid pace in every country.
There are two main key areas on which every government and wildlife federation has to work closely so that we can conserve the wildlife species especially the endangered ones. First of all, government should put in place harsh rules and regulations on hunting and poaching so they think twice before commiting this heinous crime. Secondly, International bodies like World Wide Federation should work with every government to place stiff laws on the illegal smuggling of animals parts on different countries.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that if government can impose hard rules on hunting and poaching alongside with some tighter rules on illegal smuggling, then definitely we have a strong chance to restore animal life around the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, as to, in conclusion, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1266.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 240.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.275 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70481823172 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608333333333 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.244385712 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.666666667 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6666666667 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5555555556 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192626769006 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.080760896091 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0627994537101 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116849646583 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0602805881484 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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