The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feafures, and make comparisons where relevant.
There are two maps which illustrates the diffrence of tourist building have been built between before and after.
In the first map, before constructing any facilities, there are only few trees. The island is perfectly surrounded by the sea, and they have a small beach at the end of the island's left side. But the land doesn't have anything else.
In the second map, the landscape of the island is still same, and just few more trees planted. However, after constucting, there are many diffrences. There are swimming pool between sea and beach, also got pier and two yorts following the sea line. Many accommodation have been built in two circle groups and reception house and restaurant which are biggest buildings placed at the centre of the island. Moreover, there are footpath for each house and vehicle track around the main facilities.
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Essay evaluation report
There are two maps which illustrates the diffrence of tourist building have been built between before and after.
There are two maps which illustrate the differences of an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.
There are swimming pool
There are swimming pools
Many accommodation have been built
Many accommodations have been built
which are biggest buildings
which are the biggest buildings
there are footpath
there are footpaths
Sentence: There are two maps which illustrates the diffrence of tourist building have been built between before and after.
Error: diffrence Suggestion: difference
Sentence: However, after constucting, there are many diffrences.
Error: diffrences Suggestion: differences
Error: constucting Suggestion: constructing
Sentence: There are swimming pool between sea and beach, also got pier and two yorts following the sea line.
Error: yorts Suggestion: ports
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2 //Hi, the grammar issues are serious. You may read a good grammar book,
No. of Spelling Errors: 4 2
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No. of Words: 143 200
Minimum 150 words wanted
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 4.5 out of 9
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 4 2
No. of Sentences: 9 10
No. of Words: 143 200
No. of Characters: 680 1000
No. of Different Words: 89 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.458 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.755 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.404 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 39 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 28 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 21 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 15 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.889 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.646 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.667 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.407 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.564 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.047 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 4
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 206, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... of the islands left side. But the land doesnt have anything else. In the second ma...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 250, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun accommodation seems to be countable; consider using: 'Many accommodations'.
Suggestion: Many accommodations
...r and two yorts following the sea line. Many accommodation have been built in two circle groups an...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 269, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...lowing the sea line. Many accommodation have been built in two circle groups and rec...
^^^^
Line 5, column 347, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'are the biggest'.
Suggestion: are the biggest
...nd reception house and restaurant which are biggest buildings placed at the centre of the i...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 425, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'footpaths'?
Suggestion: footpaths
...ntre of the island. Moreover, there are footpath for each house and vehicle track around...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 705.0 965.302439024 73% => OK
No of words: 142.0 196.424390244 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96478873239 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.45201032557 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4749588973 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633802816901 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 210.6 283.868780488 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.7552367607 43.030603864 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.3333333333 112.824112599 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7777777778 22.9334400587 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.44444444444 5.23603664747 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193458469092 0.215688989381 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0760815191175 0.103423049105 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562554297526 0.0843802449381 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14247101769 0.15604864568 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0246687720972 0.0819641961636 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.2329268293 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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