Some people think that it would be better for large companies and industry to move to regional areas outside large urban centers. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
It is by no means certain that large companies and industries have drastically facilitated the way we live. However, a dilemma can be arisen whether those organizations should be relocated from urban areas to rural areas. In my opinion, the benefits of this movement far exceeds its drawbacks and in this essay both aspects will be investigated prior to arriving at any conclusion.
On the one hand, it is indisputable fact that companies and industries produce more and more rubbish, the effects of which give rise to pollution in city areas. As a result, the quality of air has become deteriorated. Furthermore, large companies and industries occupy many spaces, while a deficiency of housing is growing. For instance, the Coca-Cola company, one of the largest one over the world, can be replaced to residential area which accommodates about hundreds of residents. Having changed the place of companies and industries from cities to rural areas, the lives of citizens in urban places would be noticeably flourished.
On the other hand, the alteration of places of large companies and industry might cause difficulties to employees of these institutions, in that commuting between work and home. In particular, if a company moves to another regional area, its workers will have to leave home very early and return so late. Another potential drawback is the goods of industries or companies may get spoilt on the long way, since the itinerary between rural area and urban area normally takes sufficiently period of time within which delivering products intact can be fairly challenging. Therefore, it would not bring much benefit to workers of company and industry, and the products of them as well.
Having acquainted with (the) both aspects, it appears to me that the advantages of replacing the companies and industry from urban centers to regional areas would surpass the disadvantages as it would enhance the quality of cities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 486, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... urban area normally takes sufficiently period of time within which delivering products intact...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, as to, for instance, in particular, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1622.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16560509554 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88408459183 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573248407643 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.4630047167 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.769230769 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1538461538 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7692307692 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277598813563 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0940442185074 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05338053482 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175070379443 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.02901938869 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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