Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
What other measures do you think might be effective?
In this day and age, there has been growing a concern about traffic and pollution issues. A number of people believe that the cost of fuel should be risen up so that the problems can be solved. Personally, I do not entirely side with this opinion.
It is indisputable that cars and motorbikes are extremely popular for most people around the world. These means of transport may be considered to be one of the most harmful factors to the pollution as they emit exhaust fumes to the environment. Thus , people think that increasing the petrol’s cost can restrict the use of these vehicles. While this may be true to some extent, it also means that the price of public transport such as buses, trains may significantly more expensive . As a result, there will be a number of people who are unlikely to use these public transport as their methods of travelling.
In fact, there are several ways to solve the traffic issues . It is highly recommended that government should invest in public transport to boost its convenience in order to encourage people to use them instead of cars or bikes. To clarify, authority should build more train or bus stations so that people can easily walk to these stations. Another factor which should also be taken into consideration is to decrease the price of public transport. As a consequence , people can use public transport as their comfortable means of transport and air pollution as well as traffic congestion will drop significantly.
To conclude, traffic jams and air pollution are serious issues which always be debated . In my standpoint, rising up the cost of gasoline is not a really wise idea to deal with those problems because it may boost the price of public transport. Therefore, to solve traffic problems, government should spend money on public transport to increase its term of convenience and encourage people to use them .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, really, so, therefore, thus, well, while, in fact, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1561.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90880503145 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76951273834 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.9945866349 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5625 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.875 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.125 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.01903807615 538% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139036941141 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549546463154 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0374129034199 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.096492203927 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0205315843603 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.