The graphs below show the types of music albums purchased by people in Britain according to sex and age.
The bar charts compared the percentage of albums sold in Britain by gender and four different age groups in three types of music.
It is clear from the graphs that males are more likely to buy music albums than females. Additionally, 25-34 age group accounts for the largest proportion of customers in Pop and Rock Music, while people aged 45 or more tend to love Classical Music the most.
As regard to customers' genders, 27% of Rock Music customers are males, compared to approximately 20% of females. At the same time, the rates for Pop Music are slightly lower, at 21% of males and 13% of females. By contrast, only 9% of male buyers choose Classical Music, while this rate for female customers is only around 6%.
For age groups' figures, the firgures for Pop and Rock Music are quite similar, with the main buyers are the 16-24 age group and the 25-34 age group with the proportions are all around 30% each. Meanwhile, less than 10% of people aged 45 and over choose to purchase Pop or Rock Music. By contrast, 25-34 age group and 45+ age group are more likely to buy Classical albums, at 15% and 20% respectively.
- Ielts writing task 1 11
- The map below is of the town of Gartsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town, The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 61
- Some people say that too much attention and too many resources are given in the protection of wild animals and birds. Do you agree or disagree about this opinion? 73
- The charts below show the number of girls per 100 boys in all levels of education 88
- The table shows the percentage of workers in agriculture manufacturing and services in 7 European countries in 2014 70
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 928.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61691542289 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36221504091 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502487562189 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 278.1 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.8999981791 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.111111111 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.44444444444 5.23603664747 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236712983268 0.215688989381 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113515800555 0.103423049105 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694921546307 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166205966904 0.15604864568 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0687077959934 0.0819641961636 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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