Some countries rely on tourism, as it is their main industry.these countries receives large number of tourist and have to provide many facilities for them,this brings money into the economy and creates jobs,but it can also cause problems. I am personally convinced that travelers can do several things such as becoming an Eco-traveler, respecting local cultures and traditions, and Frugality in electricity use to reduce the negative effect on local tourism and environmental.
In my opinion ,one of the worst effects of tourism is the presence of large crowds of people in streets and areas of beauty.when it happens, local people can find it difficult to do things they want to do.Also, the appearance of there home or village can transform so much that they feel they have lost their identity. For example, instead of attractive sightseeing with white sand and blue sea, the coastline from Danang to Hoian in Vietnam is covered by many resorts and luxury hotels
Another disadvantages of tourism is that tourists do not usually worry about environmental issues.if trees cut down to build hotels,this does not matter to them.However, these problems can be very worrying for people who live in area all time.
Generally,I think there are positive things that holidaymakers can do.Firstly,they can think about where they can go on holiday and avoid tourist trap and places that are already overcrowded.Secondly ,they should read somethings about their holiday destination before they leave. This will help them to understand the local people and their cultures better.Lastly ,they can focus on Eco-tours to preserve the environment and enjoy new experiences.
overall,I believe that tourism has many benefits for everyone.However, it is vital that people still think about protecting tourist locations and reducing the undesirable impacts of tourist behaviour.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, still, for example, i think, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1583.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42123287671 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10062032607 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623287671233 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 20.2975951904 202% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.2064864131 49.4020404114 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 226.142857143 106.682146367 212% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 41.7142857143 20.7667163134 201% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.2857142857 7.06120827912 245% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339099634527 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15890040217 0.084324248473 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592663905744 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180110555244 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0621338510733 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.0 13.0946893788 191% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 21.4 50.2224549098 43% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.5 11.3001002004 181% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.04 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.21 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.4 10.1190380762 182% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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