You're working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this.Write a letter to your manager. In you letter* explain why you want to take time off work* give details of the amount of time you need*suggest how yo

I am writing this email to inform you that I need 3 days' of leave for attending my post-graduation exams. I would like to be grateful, if you could grant me leave on from 4th to 6th January 2017.
As i mentioned earlier in this mail, I received my exam timetable and there is no way to postpone the task, It would be more helpful, if i could get leaves on the mentioned date and reach the exam center before time, because as i am new to this city and not familiar with the public transportation facilities and places.
I will complete my assigned tasks before i leave for my exams. In addition, in the case of any emergencies, i will available on my phone except the exam hours. I can also access my emails once i reach back to my room in the evenings.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ve on from 4th to 6th January 2017. As i mentioned earlier in this mail, I recei...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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... the task, It would be more helpful, if i could get leaves on the mentioned date ...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...the exam center before time, because as i am new to this city and not familiar wi...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... will complete my assigned tasks before i leave for my exams. In addition, in the...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...dition, in the case of any emergencies, i will available on my phone except the e...
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...hours. I can also access my emails once i reach back to my room in the evenings.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 610.0 937.175257732 65% => OK
No of words: 145.0 206.0 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.20689655172 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47010008196 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62525917411 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 127.690721649 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613793103448 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 198.0 290.88556701 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences, or put a space between two sentences.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => OK
Sentence length SD: 88.7231962654 44.8134815571 198% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.666666667 76.5299724578 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1666666667 16.8248392259 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 4.34317383033 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0932650924861 0.216113520407 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0487825208373 0.0766984524023 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537851520904 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0693850720845 0.12726935374 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0632039419629 0.0580467560999 109% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.43 8.71597938144 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.