Some countries rely on tourism, as it is their main industry.these countries receives large number of tourist and have to provide many facilities for them,this brings money into the economy and creates jobs,but it can also cause problems. I am personally convinced that travelers can do several things such as becoming an Eco-traveler, respecting local cultures and traditions, and Frugality in electricity use to reduce the negative effect on local tourism and environmental.
In my opinion ,one of the worst effects of tourism is the presence of large crowds of people in streets and areas of beauty.when it happens, local people can find it difficult to do things they want to do.Also, the appearance of there home or village can transform so much that they feel they have lost their identity.
Another disadvantages of tourism is that tourists do not usually worry about environmental issues.if trees cut down to build hotels,this does not matter to them.However, these problems can be very worrying for people who live in area all time.
Generally,I think there are positive things that holidaymakers can do.Firstly,they can think about where they can go on holiday and avoid tourist trap and places that are already overcrowded.Secondly ,they should read somethings about their holiday destination before they leave. This will help them to understand the local people and their cultures better.Lastly ,they can focus on Eco-tours to preserve the environment and enjoy new experiences.
overall,I believe that tourism has many benefits for everyone.However, it is vital that people still think about protecting tourist locations and reducing the undesirable impacts of tourist behaviour.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, still, i think, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12558218962 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.639534883721 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.2975951904 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.8333267159 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 202.714285714 106.682146367 190% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.8571428571 20.7667163134 177% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.4285714286 7.06120827912 218% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304757924193 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144017932595 0.084324248473 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534435294911 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148358192716 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0665383002707 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.9 13.0946893788 175% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.48 50.2224549098 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 11.3001002004 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.21 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.89 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.1190380762 162% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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