A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Some individuals argue that the core values of a man has changed these days. Generally speaking, a good person is not the one who are helpful, reliable, and respectful but the definition changed to people who have power and money. To my perspective, however, the mentioned idea should be rejected and below is an essay clarifying my viewpoint.
To begin with, there are variety of reasons why the past values are still valuable. It is obvious through the education systems which we teach children how to be a good citizen. Textbooks, teaching scopes, and schooling activities always try to guide young people to live truly and kindly. For instance, in primary school, teachers usually operate some events in which children can donate their money and used clothes to the poor or the people are affected by extreme weathers. Moreover, there is a special aspect called ethnic business in which the guidance about earning money but do not harm others.
Additionally, the wealth who do charity and contribute to the society are much appreciated than those who are selfish even though they are extremely rich. There are several billionaires are admired because their generous and kind heart. Bill gates is an example for this, he is brighten not only by his career, but much more evaluate by the donation fund named after he and his wife.
In conclusion, for the reasons I have mentioned above, the value of a person is still defined by how kind, true, and honest the man is rather than their economic status and social position. A man who cares about people, help others when needed, to be honest and reliable is always to be respected in our modern society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 279, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'brightened'.
Suggestion: brightened
...ill gates is an example for this, he is brighten not only by his career, but much more e...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, still, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1382.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88339222615 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50455016753 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614840989399 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6899692853 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.307692308 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7692307692 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23076923077 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0726867042795 0.244688304435 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0237390182297 0.084324248473 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0199377803228 0.0667982634062 30% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0431715022324 0.151304729494 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0227720208872 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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