The gradual increase in old population in rich, modern and industrialized country is really alarming. This will lead to a variety of negative impacts upon their people and society. There are various measures could be taken by governments to tackle this problem.
One of the main problems associated with the increase in the population of senior citizens is that governments need to allocate much more money as a pension for this age group to survive. This imposes a greater tax burden on working populations because of the reduction of labor force and larger amount of money needs. Furthermore if countries have a higher elderly proportion, the demand of healthcare and medical service will rise which can affect to the budgets for other age group. Another problem is that young adults will have to sacrifice their time to look after their elderly relatives.
However, it is not impossible to tackle these problems. Firstly, governments need to enforce the later retirement policy and rise the state pension age. For instant retirement age raise to about 67 years old in France. Besides, government should encourage people to have more children and immigration in order to boost the number of young adults in the future. Another way is governments could allocate funds for youngsters to promote them to be married.
In conclusion, the augmentation of average life expectancy in developed countries is creating some problems. The governments should have immediate and appropriate measures to increase the younger population in order to keep balance for the society.
- Some universities offer online courses as an alternative to classes delivered on campus. Do you think this is a possitive or negative development? 78
- technology effecting individual and society.do you agree? 80
- Schools should prepare students for the university rather than for work?Do you agree? 78
- Large shopping malls are replacing small shops. What is your opinion about this? Discuss with appropriate examples. 77
- The environment we are living in is in danger due to various problems…so who do u think should be responsible for solving it? Is it the governments, organization or each individual? 88
In this contemporary world,
In this contemporary world, everyone nurtures an innate desire to live long healthy and myriad advancements in the field of medical increase the possibilities of long survival of human beings. there are certain predicaments of this trend which I am articulating in the ensuing paragraphs.
To commence with, awareness about health issues have been increased in the public in the last few decades. In addition, new technologic advancements in the medical field and the number of medicines have been invented for many uncured diseases in the last few years, owing to this people are surviving longer these days. But this trend has been the main concern in various countries because it drastically increases the number of old age persons. For instance, In Japan, in a recent survey, it has been observed that the percentage of old age people immensely increased which put the extra burden on the government. There is also a huge gap between youth and old age ratio which might impact the country's growth.
Furthermore, there are some remedial measures to combat this issue. The Government should create some employment for older people and older people should be more cautious about their health at this age so that they can work. In countries where population density is low, their authorities can encourage for having more children and welcome more immigrants. For instance, countries like Canada are inviting skilled immigrants who are working in Canada, which not only recourse to reduce the younger and older generation gap, but also helping to boost the economy.
To recapitulate, taking into account all the facts mentioned above, I reckon that it can be tackled by the contribution of both the government and the public side.
In the modern world, with…
In the modern world, with the advance of technology, human life expectancy has been increasing at a rapid rate. This essay will discuss the two most important related problems, including increasing the risk of disease, disabilities, and dementia for the elderly and put pressure on countries’ economies. Our essay will also suggest some simple solutions, including increasing retirement age, and getting help from technology.
With thanks to healthier lifestyles, sufficient food, and improve medical care, people live longer so, as countries grow older, several related problems can be anticipated, like growing risk of disease and severe impact on countries’ economies. The main issue is that many people will be eligible to receive a pension so, it will directly affect the GDP index. On the other side, increasing life expectancy causes increased morbidity, and the demand for healthcare will increase. For example, 30% of the population over 60 in the UK become demented and need special care. As can be seen, a growing average of age-rate causes many vital problems, even for developed countries.
Several actions can be taken by governments to alleviate these destructive effects. Firstly, a simple solution would be to increase the retirement age, like from 60 to 70. This slight change can have a very strong effect on countries’ GDP index. Secondly, by investing and developing artificial intelligent robots, the healthcare system can be improved substantially. In this case, the elderly patient can get services from AI robots instead of nurses, which saves a lot of money on medical expenses. These solutions show how governments can decrease the influence of the main issue on the economy and healthcare system.
Although rising in average life expectancy causes vital problems, there are some simple solutions to prevent severe effects. This essay discussed two main related issues and also suggested some simple solutions in detail.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 320, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...force and larger amount of money needs. Furthermore if countries have a higher elderly prop...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, really, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1326.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2619047619 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79176749291 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579365079365 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6522544341 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.7142857143 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265038208047 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0868151464894 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0714350139176 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165514894657 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555540092215 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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