Some people say that the government should not put money on building theatres and sports stadiums. They should spend more money on medical care and education. Do you agree or disagree?
There are a group of people say that government should not invest all the money on creating theaters and sports stadiums, as they should invest more money health divisions and teaching areas. I totally disagree that a large amount of money needs to be invested in health care department, and education only, so I would mention here the details why?
For the mentioned above, government should make a kind of Balance between the two sections. For example in Qatar, government authorities have provided a specific money for each sector, they strive to make it equal, whereas, a huge amount of money was invested in building stadiums. It means, they care about sports part, as it plays an integral part in the country, as it's population have some hobbies such as; football, basketball, and other kind of sports. In addition, it has equipped by the highest technology devices like cameras,big screens and clean grounds, it was adapted for players professionally. Notably, people have the right to make it available for them. With regards to theaters are built massively in several locations in the country, whereas there are some people have talents to be actors and performing it on the stage, as it has a principal role in reflecting the tradition of the country, therefore, this part should not be negelcted. To be more specific, there are a number of people are obsessed in watching movies.
On the second hand, education and health divisions are essential parts, it has highly developed and expanded in each district of the country to reach people's satisfaction according to individuals' demands particularly.
To conclude, government should make a balance between all sides which I have mentioned it above. As it should be developed and studied well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, so, therefore, well, whereas, for example, in addition, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1475.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08620689655 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7572604405 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534482758621 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.1549688903 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.916666667 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1666666667 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299242424293 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102928529064 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0955352048566 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168456035436 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112436007853 0.056905535591 198% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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