Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.
During the different period of time, people have wanted to improve their lifestyles. Nowadays, the advances in technology help to access to this purpose. Although some people think that life was easier when grandparents were children, others believe that life today is easier than a few years ago. Personally, I think that today people have the easier life because of the development of transportation, modern health care system and new technology makes the connection between people easily.
First of all, in the past years people had many problems to travel and they endured difficult situations because of the earlier modes of transportation and long distances. Today people can go to the everywhere in a less time and enjoy their journey by using an efficient means of transport. For example, 50 years ago my grandparents went to the Europe, they had a lot of problems in this travel, but in recent years people travel by airplane in a short time without any problems.
Second, in the last years, Iran and many countries have not a lot of doctors and hospitals. For instance, when my grandmother was a child, she missed two sisters because of common disease. Nowadays, the advances in medicine prevent getting the diseases or limit the impacts of their complications. In addition, the increase of knowledge of people has an important role to have healthy lives.
Finally, in many years ago people had different ways to connect with each other like using birds to transport information or sent letters. Time was wasted by these ways and data transmission is very important especially in war years. In recent years, new technologies like Internet and cell phones help to get information and connect to everyone in a little time.
To sum up, I insist that life today is easier than past years and the needs of human have an important role in improving the level of life. People use the latest technology to make better lives for future generations.
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- It is better for children to choose jobs that are similar to their parents’ jobs than to choose jobs that are very different from their parents’ job. 70
- the decline of bird populations 73
- the sea otter 73
- Parents today are more involved in their children's education than parents were in the past. 60
- Rather than help children with their schoolwork parents should encourage their children do their work independently 83
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 22, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
During the different period of time, people have wanted to improve their li...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, second, so, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 43.0788530466 39% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1636.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 328.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98780487805 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.731101577 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539634146341 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.634550283 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.25 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8125 5.45110844103 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189591963359 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0619077122589 0.076458572812 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124053265899 0.0737576698707 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109727517023 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104579066268 0.0645574589148 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.