Question: Nowadays, all new town planning should include public parks, shopping malls, and sports facilities. Do you agree or disagree?
Judicious urban planning is an extremely intricate process. The question what should or should not be added while foundation sets the unique identity of town forever. A well-planned city should have amenities like good shopping malls, open spaces, and sports centers, needed for the denizens to lead a good life. I am in consummate accord with the given statement.
The first reason for my assertion is that the modern cities should be designed in such a way that the people living over there have the access to all resources needed for comfortable living. Since shopping is one of the most popular activity among people, so while designing a new locality, easily approachable shopping complexes should be kept in the mind.
Furthermore, people have become very health conscious and realized the importance of different sports, so for the incubation of community and the encouragement of healthy lifestyle, architects must give fair importance to sports centers, gyms or stadiums. In addition to this, the public parks act as the green lungs, of the otherwise concrete jungle, where the people of all age groups can rejuvenate themselves by indulging in activities like walking, jogging, yoga and so on. Thus it is very important to keep the provision of such means.
To conclude, when a settlement is being planned it should be planned logically, keeping in mind needs and requirements of natives, otherwise it will lead to a lopsided development. So, it would be better not to overlook these public utilities at the pre-developmental stage of city planning.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, look, so, thus, well, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1316.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16078431373 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90856165015 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635294117647 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.384769539078 520% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.6220079995 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.636363636 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1818181818 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.81818181818 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183277779033 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.062154365214 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495495562509 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106241253955 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0551574622399 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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