Some people believe the aim of university education is to help graduates get better jobs. Others believe there are much wider benefits of university education for both individuals and society.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
A group of people consider that attending the university may improve the future career prospects, otherwise, a group of people believe that university has benefit in both terms of the individual's life and society. In my view university has many advantages in various aspects of people's life.
Certainly, universities improve job prospects. Because it led people to recognise their marketable skills, thus qualification people can find better jobs for sure. Moreover, it improves the attractiveness to potential employers. What's more, the skills and the abilities a person gain from studying in the university may lead to better earnings and as a consequence, better life quality achieved.
However, the university has its own effects on individuals and society. The impact of it on individuals would be getting far away from home and family. As a result, the person's social skills will be improved. Besides their maturity and confident will grow as well. University has a significant impact on society too. As all, we know recently countries struggle with a competitive atmosphere in all over the world. Therefore, each country needs its educated people to compete and prosper. Furthermore, the educated people contribution more positively in society. So, it helps the development of the country.
In conclusion, university education has many impacts on person's future career. Besides, it has many positive effects on individuals and society in terms of development.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 185, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
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Line 3, column 230, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: What's
... attractiveness to potential employers. Whats more, the skills and the abilities a pe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, in conclusion, as a result, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1248.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 228.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47368421053 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05187528441 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.8511546319 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.4117647059 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4117647059 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05882352941 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302090287612 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0823014401422 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696950108009 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171299246317 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0662236673409 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 41.36 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.85 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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