Dear Kinjal,
I wish you are pink at your health. I am writing this letter in order to seek your support in collecting a fund of Rupees One lac for the old age home where I am giving my service as a volunteer since last two years.
Actually, "sandhya-kutir" old age home has 120 senior citizens under its shelter to take care of them without any reserve. Now, the trust who is running this facility wants to set up a small workshop for these people, where they can make various artifacts and earn their livelihood to be independent. Hence, we are in a need of fund as mentioned above to buy instruments and machines.
As I am aware that You are working as an HR manager with the good corporate organization where you might have a provision under the corporate social responsibility budget for this kind of charity.Finally, We will be pleased to gift a beautiful sculpture of buddha made by them for the company premises as a gratitude toward the donated amount. I will be grateful if you can take our proposal forward to your management as well as to the employees. So that whoever will be interested in contributing, can come forward and contact us.
I hope you will find our proposal in a service of the humanity and you will extend your helping hand to realize this herculean task.
Warm regards,
yours only
XYZ
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 196, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Finally
...ibility budget for this kind of charity.Finally, We will be pleased to gift a beautiful...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, finally, hence, if, so, well, as to, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1099.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 237.0 206.0 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63713080169 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99514464041 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628691983122 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 351.9 290.88556701 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.360824742268 277% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.6664632543 44.8134815571 189% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.9 76.5299724578 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7 16.8248392259 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1 4.34317383033 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153428746087 0.216113520407 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0519533988625 0.0766984524023 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0402558453058 0.0603063233224 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0907832545072 0.12726935374 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353491703541 0.0580467560999 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 8.37731958763 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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