The society would benefit from a ban on all forms of advertising. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Advertising in modern societies is ubiquitous - on the radio, TV and the internet. It has many negative points, but pros of advertising is outweighs the negative. So, i firmly disagree with statement of a ban on all advertisement.
It is an undeniable fact that advertising helps to introduce a new product in market. Some technological devices have to manifest in front of society because of the most of people have not ample time to search on new product, which is actually looking by individual since long time. From fantastic example of the Apple, leading mobile company, have to show their new feature and a new operating system on television or on the internet. Additionally, introduction of products have profound information about products. As a consequence, consumers compare their needs and take a correct decision on their choice.
Undoubtedly, advertising have the power to amendment of social issues. Firstly, some issues can perilous for survival of society. Take an example of female foeticide, in 1930, Rajaram Mohan Rai, a socialist, removed this practice from India. This decision aids Indian communities to maintain male-female ratio. Another issue related is polio. Amitabh bachchan, an actor, stimulated people to get two drops of medicines through the television. Hence, nowadays, India becomes a polio free country in the world.
On the flip side, advertising has some disadvantages also. To begin, Ads can attract folk. In other words, children, the most important member of society, influence towards digital marketing. Thus, they pesters their parents for buying gadgets. However, this situation can be abated by restriction on children to watch a TV or distract their mind from gadgets. Finally, ads, especially adult, have negative impact on society, when family, together, watch a family show and then dwelling period fill with 18+ ads, therefore all members feel embarrassment.
To conclude, having negative effects of digital marketing on society, benefits are definitely dominated cons of advertising.
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
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Suggestion: as well
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Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'pester'
Suggestion: pester
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, first, firstly, hence, however, if, look, so, then, therefore, thus, well, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1728.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45110410095 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96901979068 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.656151419558 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.0973336216 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.5454545455 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4090909091 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.40909090909 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112315401657 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0280767597503 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048105965338 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0690753832097 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406098878587 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.06 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 78.4519038076 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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