Dear Edward
How every thing is going on. Here I am quiet well with good health. How your work is going on. It has been very long since
I wrote you. My work keep me so busy I never have a minute to myself. I am writing to inform you that last month i changed my job
As you know I was not satisfied with my previous job in which I was keep on doing rudimentary work with same boring assignments . So finally I left and joined in Cosmo organisation where i discovered my dream job. My obligations are to go on field trip every week day to the Remote areas where we can explore many new adventures.I have to supply pasta packets to the countryside and deal with distributers to discuss about our product. And mean while I can go across hill stations to supply. It very thrilling and fabulous job with a handsome salary. Well I feel it's my kind of job with all pleasures.
Okay with this I remain keep writing letter and I am really looking forward to meet
Yours lovingly
adam
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 123, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...is going on. It has been very long since I wrote you. My work keep me so busy I n...
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Line 3, column 87, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...have a minute to myself. I am writing to inform you that last month i changed my ...
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Line 3, column 116, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... writing to inform you that last month i changed my job As you know I was not ...
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Line 3, column 132, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...orm you that last month i changed my job As you know I was not satisfied with m...
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Line 4, column 22, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...i changed my job As you know I was not satisfied with my previous job in which...
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Line 4, column 33, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y job As you know I was not satisfied with my previous job in which I was keep...
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Line 4, column 130, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...entary work with same boring assignments . So finally I left and joined in Cosmo o...
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Line 4, column 190, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... and joined in Cosmo organisation where i discovered my dream job. My obligation...
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Line 4, column 219, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tion where i discovered my dream job. My obligations are to go on field trip ever...
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Line 4, column 333, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...here we can explore many new adventures.I have to supply pasta packets to the cou...
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Line 4, column 409, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e countryside and deal with distributers to discuss about our product. And mean ...
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Line 4, column 431, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... with distributers to discuss about our product. And mean while I can go across ...
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Line 4, column 446, Rule ID: MEAN_WHILE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'meanwhile'?
Suggestion: meanwhile
...ers to discuss about our product. And mean while I can go across hill stations to suppl...
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Line 4, column 472, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... product. And mean while I can go across hill stations to supply. It very thrilli...
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Line 4, column 529, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o supply. It very thrilling and fabulous job with a handsome salary. Well I feel ...
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Line 4, column 571, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...job with a handsome salary. Well I feel its my kind of job with all pleasures. Oka...
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Line 5, column 24, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... all pleasures. Okay with this I remain keep writing letter and I am really loo...
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Line 5, column 38, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... Okay with this I remain keep writing letter and I am really looking forward t...
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Line 5, column 79, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to meeting'.
Suggestion: to meeting
... letter and I am really looking forward to meet Yours lovingly adam
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Line 5, column 86, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and I am really looking forward to meet Yours lovingly adam
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, look, really, so, well, while, i feel, kind of, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 798.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.29032258065 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41549091424 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661290322581 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.360824742268 554% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.9378098283 44.8134815571 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.5 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 4.34317383033 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 2.54639175258 785% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172158991194 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605615109439 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580928640718 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0834242819096 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0263262780418 0.0580467560999 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 8.37731958763 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.31 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.