you are renting an apartment and the neighbors are disturbing you. write a letter to your landlord explaining what the problem is, what do you do to solve the problem and what action you want the owner to take.
Dear Sir,
I am writing to complain about some disturbances, which have been happened by my adjacent neighbors.
They are too noisy, they would like to listen deafening music at midnight, when I am going to sleep. They throw party every weekend night, which may ends at next day morning. I cannot sleep in peace, therefore I feel sleepy at work on the first day of the week. I asked them a number of times to keep the volume down during parties, but they gave me deaf ears.
I would be appreciated, if you could come and talk with them. If they do not alter their demeanor, I will write a complain letter to real state agency and request to take action against them.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... parties, but they gave me deaf ears. I would be appreciated, if you could come...
^
Line 4, column 113, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... not alter their demeanor, I will write a complain letter to real state agency and request...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, may, so, therefore, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 597.0 937.175257732 64% => OK
No of words: 133.0 206.0 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48872180451 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.39596269041 3.78020617076 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30632280478 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 127.690721649 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.766917293233 0.622605031667 123% => OK
syllable_count: 175.5 290.88556701 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.360824742268 277% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5864456431 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.625 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.625 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 4.34317383033 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112040653319 0.216113520407 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0504582847674 0.0766984524023 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566869329998 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0838354892427 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0741661348724 0.0580467560999 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 8.71597938144 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 41.2886597938 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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