TPO31Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
From a broad perspective, in the current state of affairs we face, in which, so complex becomes today's world that it represents new challneges to the pople. Therefore, it is not far-fetched to presume that these innovatations alter the overall attitude of individuals toward their lives. However, whether this new circumstance is seen pleasant() or not dependes on the lens through which one is looking. There is a growing segment of people who contend this idea that contentement in life has decreased owing to these rapid changes. I personally repudiate this statement, and in the ensuing paragraph the rational behind this opinion will be further elaborated.
First and foremost, these alterations inspire people. There is no denying the fact that motivation is the backbone for pursuing a dynamic life. Human requires to set various types of targets, from short-trem to lang-term, in order to pursuade itself to take next steps to achieve the goals. Undoubtedly, accolpishment gives the sense of intense gratification and no one can experience a hppy life without attemp to obtain the aims. According to the latest research attributing to DR. Kevin. Rude, a prominent and highly respected professor in the Depratment of Pshycology at the University of Macqurie, people who define plans for their lives are 70% more satisfaction that those who merely spend times without following particular purpose.This probe provides further legitimacy of this idea that the more people encounter the challenges, the more they can enjoy and subsequently feel hapiness in their lives.
Another vital point which should be taken into consideration is that the changes provide more opportunities for people. Needless to say that aside from all the difficulties that today's world has imposed to the individuals, it brings a wide range of chances which had not been available for the previous generation. Althought, various technologies make the world far faster places which it makes situation problematic for those are not capable to keep up with such rapid pace, they assist people to save considerable time. Take all the electric servises offering by the banks or other organizations that cause their requirements have been done just by a click. In addition, the unprecedented progress in the medicine science which constatly try to find the cure for fatal diseases. These are examples of undenaible changes that not only gift the happy life for people living in this era, but also helps them better lives in various facets.
TO wrap it up, it is more judicious to say that nowdays, people experience far more happier live rather than their parents. The changes which are the main reposible for this satisfies feeling presents stimulus people and also makes their life much easier.
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- TPO 27 90
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 741, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...es without following particular purpose.This probe provides further legitimacy of th...
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Line 3, column 544, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...considerable time. Take all the electric servises offering by the banks or other ...
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Line 4, column 81, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'happier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: happier
...say that nowdays, people experience far more happier live rather than their parents. The cha...
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Line 4, column 193, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'presents'' or 'present's'?
Suggestion: presents'; present's
...in reposible for this satisfies feeling presents stimulus people and also makes their li...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, so, therefore, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 22.0 11.0286738351 199% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2329.0 1977.66487455 118% => OK
No of words: 446.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22197309417 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5955099915 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82971100519 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 263.0 212.727598566 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589686098655 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 729.9 618.680645161 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.4181492771 48.9658058833 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.578947368 100.406767564 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4736842105 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.31578947368 5.45110844103 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145737650854 0.236089414692 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0383434673218 0.076458572812 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445988174226 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0950971837129 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390389417154 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.01818996416 120% => OK
difficult_words: 137.0 86.8835125448 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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