Some people say that the only reason for learning foreign language is in order to travel or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reason why someone should learn a foreign language
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Learning a foreign language has many advantages including the better understanding of different culture, better job prospect, efficient and so on. While it is widely believed that only reason we should learn a second language is to travel or work in foreign country, many others opine that the benefits of learning a different language are not restricted on the job and travel prospect only. In my point of view, I agree with the later idea.
It is true that people are keen on learning another language in regard to go travelling or work in a foreign country. To be clear, because of globalization progress, learning second language assure good employment. In addition, people need to learn foreign language if they want to go oversea. For example. if people want to visit a English-speaking country, they are better to learn basic conversation in the local language to communicate with native speakers in daily life.
Nonetheless, travelling or working is not the only reasons why people learn foreign language. People need a foreign language for their studies. Many academic programs make learning a foreign language compulsory. People learn new language for job-purpose as well. Some learn because they love it.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that learning other language is self-benefit which enables human to be close to other cultures, not limited to traveling and job-seeking purpose. By doing so, it promises such bright future for language learners.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 176, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to second'
Suggestion: to second
...use of globalization progress, learning second language assure good employment. In add...
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Line 3, column 308, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...f they want to go oversea. For example. if people want to visit a English-speaking...
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Line 3, column 332, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...a. For example. if people want to visit a English-speaking country, they are bett...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, nonetheless, second, so, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in regard to, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1235.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 236.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23305084746 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88418044512 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546610169492 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 61.2910723968 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.2142857143 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8571428571 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64285714286 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.448176410744 0.244688304435 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.171565069611 0.084324248473 203% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121062578642 0.0667982634062 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.289866673277 0.151304729494 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118450316495 0.056905535591 208% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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