Financial education should be a mandatory component of the school program. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
As we know that every person have to face the financial issues in there later life, so he must have glean of information related to finance and banks. Mostly, educational institutions giving specific subject degrees, so engineering student don’t have any information related to finance. It will quite byzantine for them to understand the financial terms.
First we need to understand the educational structure in this world, after intermediate students have eclectic of field to choose, and once they have chosen their path, they have to remain specific to their field. Some people think that it would encumber their knowledge area and so they have difficulties to get banking terms. Every person must have knowledge related to banking and otherwise he would suffer due to lack of information, that’s why people says that financial education should be mandatory subject in school programs.
Besides the facts, it is also a reality that already students have glut courses to pass them, so another course could be burden on them, while on the other hand some students could raise a question, why they have to study that course which is out of their curriculum.
In my opinion, although it is necessary to have banking information, but we know that, in banks people are there to help and giving financial information. Moreover you should not make it mandatory component at school level, instead you will allow student chose, whether they want to select that particular course or not.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 101, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'gleaned'.
Suggestion: gleaned
...es in there later life, so he must have glean of information related to finance and b...
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Line 7, column 156, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
... help and giving financial information. Moreover you should not make it mandatory compon...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, moreover, so, while, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1258.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15573770492 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66399747719 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569672131148 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.7853027239 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.777777778 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1111111111 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127145319637 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0597410856498 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620415266856 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.081390986388 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508516433498 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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