There are certain considerations or factors that everyone can take into account to investigate and examine people’s opinion. I certainly believe that nowadays teachers are more appreciated by our society than past. someone can consciously weigh the pros and cons of each side. The explanations go as follows.
The first and foremost reason I think teachers are now more valuable than past is having technology. These days almost every students have access to internet with high speed. Through this facility everyone can read a lot about teachers value in their prosperity in life. There are many articles point out to teachers integral parts in students future lives. Therefor it comes to their mind that it is essential to appreciate their work by sending messages on many programs such as Facebook, Instagram or Viber. For instance, Google company celebrate teachers day by changing their website icon to teachers symbol. Consequently, people from all over the world realize it and make their teachers happy by calling them or send them postcards.
Furthermore, education is more important in modern life and teachers play a main role in it. So people pay more attention to them for this reason. To illustrate my point, I want to refer to a survey conducted by psychologists in USA. They recent research show that when you consider that someone can make your future well you will admire him. It is obviously that teacher’s task is extending students knowledge and this will be cause student’s success. So according this survey teachers will be admired by many people.
Moreover, up to date marketing encourage us to appreciate our teachers more than before. Modern marketing includes advertisements that we see everyday on citys billboards, shopping malls or Television. In fact, these kind of advertisement help us to remember teachers day. For example, when you go to grocery store you see balloons, postal card, candy or decoration stuff and it reminds you that teachers day is coming soon. Therefore, you will buy them for your beloved teachers to make them delightful.
To sum up, taking to account all these factors, I think that people at the present time recognize the full worth of teachers in contrast with the past. Access to the high-speed internet, crucial role of education and modern marketing are the prime and conspicuous reasons.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Someone
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Message: Did you mean 'because'?
Suggestion: because
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Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'teachers'' or 'teacher's'?
Suggestion: teachers'; teacher's
...ecoration stuff and it reminds you that teachers day is coming soon. Therefore, you will...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, i think, in contrast, in fact, kind of, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2000.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 385.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19480519481 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81565390243 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581818181818 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 612.0 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.7622773593 48.9658058833 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.3333333333 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0416666667 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 5.45110844103 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201451889925 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0565585207762 0.076458572812 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563398971534 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10700938727 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0320198533733 0.0645574589148 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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