The pie charts below describe average household expenditures by major categories in Japan and Malaysia in 2010. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown.

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The charts compare the average household spending in Jap...
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...he charts compare the average household spending in Japan and Malaysia in t...
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...compare the average household spending in Japan and Malaysia in terms of fi...
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...are the average household spending in Japan and Malaysia in terms of five i...
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...sehold spending in Japan and Malaysia in terms of five important categories ...
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...ld spending in Japan and Malaysia in terms of five important categories in 20...
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...important categories in 2010. Overall, it is clear that householders in b...
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...rtant categories in 2010. Overall, it is clear that householders in both ...
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...t categories in 2010. Overall, it is clear that householders in both cou...
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...ories in 2010. Overall, it is clear that householders in both countries ...
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...in 2010. Overall, it is clear that householders in both countries spent...
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...rall, it is clear that householders in both countries spent the largest...
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..., it is clear that householders in both countries spent the largest p...
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... is clear that householders in both countries spent the largest proport...
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... that householders in both countries spent the largest proportion of th...
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...householders in both countries spent the largest proportion of their in...
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...holders in both countries spent the largest proportion of their income ...
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...in both countries spent the largest proportion of their income on just ...
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...ntries spent the largest proportion of their income on just three cate...
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...es spent the largest proportion of their income on just three categori...
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...nt the largest proportion of their income on just three categories – ...
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... largest proportion of their income on just three categories – housing,...
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...gest proportion of their income on just three categories – housing, fo...
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... proportion of their income on just three categories – housing, food an...
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...tion of their income on just three categories – housing, food and othe...
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...eir income on just three categories – housing, food and other goods and...
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... income on just three categories – housing, food and other goods and s...
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...on just three categories – housing, food and other goods and services. ...
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...st three categories – housing, food and other goods and services. The ...
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...hree categories – housing, food and other goods and services. The perc...
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...ies – housing, food and other goods and services. The percentage figur...
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...– housing, food and other goods and services. The percentage figures f...
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... food and other goods and services. The percentage figures for spending ...
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... and other goods and services. The percentage figures for spending on ...
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...goods and services. The percentage figures for spending on transport a...
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...d services. The percentage figures for spending on transport and heal...
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...rvices. The percentage figures for spending on transport and healthcar...
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... The percentage figures for spending on transport and healthcare in Japan...
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... percentage figures for spending on transport and healthcare in Japan wer...
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...e figures for spending on transport and healthcare in Japan were double th...
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...gures for spending on transport and healthcare in Japan were double those fo...
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...for Malaysia. In Malaysian households, the highest category was housing, which ...
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... category was housing, which represented 34% of the total expenditure. Whereas t...
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...this was higher than in Japan, with just 21% spent on housing, Japanese household...
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...olders spent the highest proportion on a range of other goods and services, ...
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...pent the highest proportion on a range of other goods and services, at 29...
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... the highest proportion on a range of other goods and services, at 29%. ...
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...ghest proportion on a range of other goods and services, at 29%. Thi...
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...roportion on a range of other goods and services, at 29%. This was ...
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...tion on a range of other goods and services, at 29%. This was sligh...
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... range of other goods and services, at 29%. This was slightly more t...
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...ge of other goods and services, at 29%. This was slightly more than ...
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... other goods and services, at 29%. This was slightly more than in Mala...
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... and services, at 29%. This was slightly more than in Malaysia. In ...
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..., at 29%. This was slightly more than in Malaysia. In terms of food, ...
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... 29%. This was slightly more than in Malaysia. In terms of food, the fi...
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.... This was slightly more than in Malaysia. In terms of food, the figures...
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... for both countries were similar, at 27% and 24% for Malaysia and Japan respectiv...
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...tively. Expenditure on health care was the lowest category. In Japan, thi...
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...y. Expenditure on health care was the lowest category. In Japan, this ac...
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... health care was the lowest category. In Japan, this accounted for 6% of ...
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...th care was the lowest category. In Japan, this accounted for 6% of the ...
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...was the lowest category. In Japan, this accounted for 6% of the total, w...
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...he lowest category. In Japan, this accounted for 6% of the total, while 2...
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...category. In Japan, this accounted for 6% of the total, while 20% of househ...
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...ehold spending went on transport. These figures were exactly double those shown...
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...rt. These figures were exactly double those shown for Malaysia.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 901.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 168.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3630952381 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78015700261 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547619047619 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.2788773689 43.030603864 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.1 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8 22.9334400587 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.4 5.23603664747 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 14.0 3.83414634146 365% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 67.0 1.69756097561 3947% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224945061523 0.215688989381 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0992673003496 0.103423049105 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709059741701 0.0843802449381 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0904789136605 0.15604864568 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0684585232648 0.0819641961636 84% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.2329268293 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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