Write a letter to your friend inviting to a public festival in your country?
1. describe the event
2. Invite him/her to the event.
3. Plan for rest of the day
Hi Dave,
How are you doing? We haven’t spoken for a while now. Hence, I though it will be a great idea to invite you to the Kite Festival in Jaipur on 14th January.
The festival starts as early as the Sun rises, continues until the end of the day. People fly kites of different shapes and size, with their friends and families. It is a complete party atmosphere with people having complete fun. There will music, games, barbecue food. All in all, it is one of the best occasion to enjoy winters in the Pink city of Rajasthan.
While the day is over, we will plan a night tour of Jaipur as I know you have always wanted to visit it. Some of the historical places are amazing when evening lights are turned on and look magnificent. You will be able to do some shopping in the local market which is tremendously famous for its pottery.
I really hope you will be able to come over. It will not be same with you.
Yours truly,
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 106, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
...now you have always wanted to visit it. Some of the historical places are amazing when even...
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Line 11, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ot be same with you. Yours truly, John
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, look, really, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 775.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37853107345 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25939260129 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64406779661 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.360824742268 277% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.2806599556 44.8134815571 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 55.3571428571 76.5299724578 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.6428571429 16.8248392259 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.42857142857 4.34317383033 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0992163654735 0.216113520407 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0337560092722 0.0766984524023 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426795305734 0.0603063233224 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0469442512329 0.12726935374 37% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329815465182 0.0580467560999 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.5 8.37731958763 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.24 8.71597938144 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.