attending univerisity
People attend college and university for many different reasons. Some people think that the purpose of attending university is to have a better career, other believe that attending university is a good chance to gain more knowledge. Although. I under stand their point of view; I have a different opinion I believe that attending university is important for the basis of educational, social and financial.
Educational, university provides the opportunity for better education. Attending university is a good chance for many students to gain more information. The professors in the university are highly educated and they are a good source of information. When students attend college they will benefit from the professor knowledge. Professors are able to facilitate the subject to the students, they can help student to under stand the subject better by providing more sources and notes. Students can revise the subject at home and if they did not understand, they can easily discuss the important point with their professor during the lecture.
Socially speaking, the university is the best environment for many students to increase their social net work. Most of high school students when they move to the university life, they feel like they are strangers. It is a new life for them. They have to depend on them selves on every step in their lives. The university life is the perfect way to promote them to be more sociable. In the university students have the chances to interact with other students; they have the opportunity to depend on themselves on different tasks in their lives. University life prepares students for their future life. In the university, students understand the meaning of the time, when the professors assign a project for them to work on; students have to submit the project in a specific time to get the high grade. That help students to mange their time properly.
Financially, entering university is the better way to teach students that money is important. Starting from the beginning students have to work hard to get scholarship. Students know that if they work hard they will get awards. The financial award is the most important, as student start to apply for their university they know that after graduation they have to repay all the money back. Students work hard all over their university studying. After graduation they start to search for a job , in their job they work hard to get paid, then to get raise. That is how university life teach students the meaning of working hard all over their life, and consequently the important of money in their lives.
In conclusion, for the reasons stated above, attending university id important for students, as the university life provides students with many opportunities to improve their future lives.
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...s a good chance to gain more knowledge. Although. I under stand their point of view; I h...
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...nce to gain more knowledge. Although. I under stand their point of view; I have a different...
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...raduation they start to search for a job , in their job they work hard to get paid...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, so, then, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2350.0 1977.66487455 119% => OK
No of words: 459.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11982570806 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62863751936 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.740410329 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.383442265795 0.524837075471 73% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 736.2 618.680645161 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.994623655914 201% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.313326472 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.3846153846 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6538461538 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.57692307692 5.45110844103 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0657796037173 0.236089414692 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0302186994134 0.076458572812 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574080185017 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0693097596802 0.150856017488 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0722283955766 0.0645574589148 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.