building new factory
Some people think that building new factory in our town will benefit the community. Those people think that new factory in our town will bring new job to the area, and also rejuvenate our community. Although I understand their point of view, I have a different opinion. I believe that building new factory in our community will have many disadvantages. The basis of my opinion is environmental, social and personal.
First from the environmental perspective, we live in clean, beautiful town if we decided to build new factory in our town, every thing in our community will destroyed, for instance, the air we breathe will become dirty, the water is going to be polluted by the waste of the factory, and even the green trees will die because of the factory’s pollution.
Second, from the social view, we live in a small town every one know each other. We live like a big family. Our town is so quite and beautiful. If a new factory builds in our town, new people arrive to our area, people want t build new homes, moreover, and the street will be over crowded too much traffic will be there in our town. The disadvantages of building new factory is outweighed the advantages, fast growth can cause more harm than good.
Third, personally, the new factory will change our town a lot. Our town is safe and pleasant. Every body knows every body. For example, my kids usually play on the front yard with their bikes, if a new factory build, I will never fell that it is safe for my kids to play by themselves. The traffic will cause a lot of noise and danger. We will lose the quite life style of our community. New stranger people will arrive to our community.
In conclusion, for the reason I stated, building new factory has positive effect, but its negative effect are more. Building new factories cause pollution, disturb the quite life style of our community also danger on our health and safety.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eople think that new factory in our town will bring new job to the area, and also...
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Suggestion: destroy
...town, every thing in our community will destroyed, for instance, the air we breathe will ...
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Suggestion:
...e quite life style of our community. New stranger people will arrive to our commu...
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...danger on our health and safety.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, second, so, third, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1596.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 338.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72189349112 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56254694125 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485207100592 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 495.9 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 74.2306540453 48.9658058833 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.8 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.426682816577 0.236089414692 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.162797030035 0.076458572812 213% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.160538765694 0.0737576698707 218% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.32617134997 0.150856017488 216% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0879602856751 0.0645574589148 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.95 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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