Many countries and cultures around the world are experiencing higher rate of childhood obesity. In your opinion, what can be done to help children maintain a healthy weight and lifestyle?
It is true that the rate of obesity in children in several countries and cultures across the globe has been increasing rapidly in recent years. Various measures could be taken to tackle this problem.
The first effective way to fight or prevent childhood obesity and weight problems is to include parents in the dietary program. Children should be encouraged to adopt healthy eating habits/develop a well-balanced diet. For instance, instead of consuming junk food or sugary products which are rich in saturated fat, they should put more vegetables in their daily meals. Those food are not only low in fat and rich in fiber but also give us adequate energy to work and study. Moreover, parents should help their kids understand the benefits of being physically active. Activities like Tv binge watching need to be replaced by physical activities and exercises. For example, children can take part in swimming to profuse sweating and burn calories, which helps to control weight.
Undoubtedly, schools and the government also play a part in avoiding weight gain in children. Specifically, children should be educated at school about the health-risk consequences associated with obesity. If they perceive that being overweight can harm the body system and even lead to some form of cancers and disability later in life, they will be more aware of their health status. Furthermore, the government should set strict regulations on unhealthy food advertisement aimed at/geared towards kids. It is obvious that heavy exposure to those advertisements would cause fake hunger signals and trigger the desire to buy non-nutritious food.
In conclusion, parents, schools and the government could adopt various measures to help children maintain an appropriate body weight and develop a healthy lifestyle.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 370, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this food' or 'Those foods'?
Suggestion: This food; Those foods
...t more vegetables in their daily meals. Those food are not only low in fat and rich in fib...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1516.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35689045936 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85481315878 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650176678445 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.8031444986 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.066666667 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8666666667 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.13333333333 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203415097276 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628492771946 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486309545979 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124525274963 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.018570629382 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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