Some people think that the best way to gather information is through newspapers while others believe in other better ways. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is often argue that, access information by news paper is better way to convey news. While some others believe that there are other options. Nevertheless, news paper is a good media for getting news, I believe not only news paper but also there are many different possibilities.
On the one hand, news paper is the media used for transforming new information from various area. In other words, peoples are most likely to have gather news from newspaper. In addition authorised comments, letters, changes in variety of field are posted in news paper too. For instance, government orders from any department usually they are posting in news paper, which is better way to inform every one.
On the other hand, many think there are various way to send information to the society by internet, computers, or even public notice board and so on. Recently the better way to convey news from other medias like television, social media as well.
In my perception, nowadays news are spreading mostly by the social media. All generations are influenced by this innovative news medias, so that gathering news by such media would useful than the news paper in modern world.
To sum up, either news paper or other medias are useful to convey information to public. Notwithstanding, various medias like news channels, internet are the best.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 47, Rule ID: NEWS_PAPER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'newspaper'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: newspaper
...often argue that, access information by news paper is better way to convey news. While som...
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Line 1, column 88, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ews paper is better way to convey news. While some others believe that there are othe...
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Line 1, column 158, Rule ID: NEWS_PAPER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'newspaper'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: newspaper
... there are other options. Nevertheless, news paper is a good media for getting news, I bel...
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Line 1, column 222, Rule ID: NEWS_PAPER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'newspaper'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: newspaper
...ia for getting news, I believe not only news paper but also there are many different possi...
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Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
... not only news paper but also there are many different possibilities. On the one hand, news...
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Message: Did you mean 'newspaper'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: newspaper
...rent possibilities. On the one hand, news paper is the media used for transforming new ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
... to have gather news from newspaper. In addition authorised comments, letters, changes i...
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Line 3, column 259, Rule ID: NEWS_PAPER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'newspaper'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: newspaper
...anges in variety of field are posted in news paper too. For instance, government orders fr...
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Line 3, column 355, Rule ID: NEWS_PAPER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'newspaper'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: newspaper
... department usually they are posting in news paper, which is better way to inform every on...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...vision, social media as well. In my perception, nowadays news are spreading ...
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Line 8, column 198, Rule ID: NEWS_PAPER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'newspaper'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: newspaper
...ews by such media would useful than the news paper in modern world. To sum up, either n...
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Message: Did you mean 'newspaper'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: newspaper
...r in modern world. To sum up, either news paper or other medias are useful to convey in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, nevertheless, so, well, while, for instance, in addition, in other words, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1118.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 222.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03603603604 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62313816388 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572072072072 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 351.0 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.8255281626 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0769230769 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165527226628 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0899189843639 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.094666667559 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113571055144 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0599978364592 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.