The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth.
The diagrams illustrate the milestones of silkworm life, from birth to maturity and neccessary steps which are required to product silk cloth.
Overall, there are four main stages in cycle of silkworm from being silkworm larva to be called "moth". Regarding to silk cloth production, cocoon which plays the most major material role experienced five main steps in order to become silk cloth.
Silkworm begins their lives in mulberry leaves, which is not only where adult silkworm lays their eggs but also is food of baby silkworm. After ten days, eggs of silkworm emerge to silkworm larva. These baby silkworm eat mulberry leaves for four to six weeks. Then, they begin building their silk thread and take into it to become cocoon, this period lasts for three to eight days. From cocoon to growth silkworm named "moth" account for 16 days in total time of cycle silkworm. Following the this stage, these moth continue reproducting and the new generation is started.
What is more, to product silk cloth, first, cocoon are selected together and boiled by water in high tempurature. Then, in condition without wind, a boilded cocoon can be spun reach from 300 to 900 metres in leghth of thread. Next step, thread is twisted into each ring and dried with variety types of colour. Finally, they are weaved and become silk cloth.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 499, Rule ID: DT_DT[2]
Message: Maybe you need to remove the second determiner so that only 'the' or 'this' is left.
Suggestion: the; this
...total time of cycle silkworm. Following the this stage, these moth continue reproducting...
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Line 3, column 515, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this moth' or 'these moths'?
Suggestion: this moth; these moths
...cle silkworm. Following the this stage, these moth continue reproducting and the new gener...
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Line 4, column 328, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'woven'.
Suggestion: woven
...iety types of colour. Finally, they are weaved and become silk cloth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, regarding, so, then, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1123.0 965.302439024 116% => OK
No of words: 224.0 196.424390244 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01339285714 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47754182377 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 106.607317073 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 324.0 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 1.0 0.114634146341 872% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.5434020418 43.030603864 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.3846153846 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2307692308 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92307692308 5.23603664747 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323979851844 0.215688989381 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110805116807 0.103423049105 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0843857890759 0.0843802449381 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214317770549 0.15604864568 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0781322875292 0.0819641961636 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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