Overpopulation in many major urban centers around the world is a major problem. What are the causes of this? How can this problem be solved?
The main issue of the present world is more and more people are moving to large cites. This essay will consider its causes and give some useful solutions.
There are two main causes of overpopulation in major cites. Firstly, the imbalance of quality of life makes those migrations. While in countryside , they just have a difficult life such as low-paid, bad educational institutions for their children and less support from government. If they living in major urban center, they ‘ll have a better life. Not only they might have some opportunities career, better schools or colleges and better heath service or supports .Secondly , Many industrial areas have been built near their houses .Which causes a bad effects to their environment. These industries have discharged wastes without planning, which really threatens these people life with some dangerous epidemics.
There are several actions that could be use to eradicate the problems described above. First measure would be to built more colleges , schools with high educational quality in suburb, so that they needn’t to move to big cities for their children ‘s academic education. A second measure would be more attention of government in these areas because they need better supports from society like healthy services, supplies when they’re suffer natural disaster. The last measure would be to control the development of industrial areas , which means to reduce the chemical wastes have been discharged to river or air or earth. In this way, they can have a better life.
In conclusion , We have many way to tackle problems that to deplete amount of people moving to major urban centers .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, really, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1408.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29323308271 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66771961442 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586466165414 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.5735554375 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.571428571 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64285714286 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180564489363 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0767619267206 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0776879276348 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130912057779 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0642770299413 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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