In many countries people tend to move overseas or move to a different part of their country after their retirement. Discuss why it is so and the outcomes of this situation. Provide specific reasons and examples to support your opinion
In many countries there is a trend among people to move to abroad or to different place in the country itself after retirement.
In this essay we will discuss the reasons for the migration as well as the outcomes of this kind of migration.
Retired people have plenty of leisure time at their hands. They move to other cities or abroad to travel and explore places which they couldn't do during job/work. They even try their hand at business-small/large based on the region they have moved to.For Instance they can start a restaurant of traditional food or a cafe which makes dishes traditional re...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1127.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67634854772 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52529088588 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 176.041082164 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51867219917 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 355.5 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6218963383 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9166666667 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0833333333 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259150619644 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107912606287 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0762150908039 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170340292387 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0872504368041 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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