Some people think that teenage years are the happiest times of most people's lives.others think that adult life bring more happiness,in spite of greater responsibilities.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Different individuals have their own opinion about the happiest phase in human’s life. Some believe that adolescent is the cheeriest time’s in the individual’s life while others think that despite huge responsibilities grown-ups are the happier people. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument in detail and provide evidence as to why adult life is blissful.
As for those who believe that teenage is the enjoyable phase. They feel this because the youth do not have any duties and can live a carefree life. For instance, they do not have to worry about job, paying bills and managing money like adults. In addition to this, no one is dependent on them and they can spend most of their time performing tasks they enjoy the most. A fantastic example of this they can spend whole day doing things such as playing video games, watching T.V.
In contrast, others who hold the notion that adulthood is the blissful phase. Firstly, an adult usually has higher chance to try somethings such as having an identity card, driving license, credit card. For example, adults have the freedom of spending and having a great job. Moreover, they get much money from their job that they can use to help others. More specifically taking care of needs of family and children give then self-satisfaction which in turn makes them happy.
In conclusion, although having no responsibilities can help people to stay happy, but the freedom to spend money as they like and knowing that you are able to satisfy family requirements bring more happiness. Thus, it is seen that older people are more happier than younger people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, then, thus, while, as for, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1368.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01098901099 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67941644728 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619047619048 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5469254992 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.7142857143 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5714285714 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175916000318 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0588744447614 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521736558508 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11271097071 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0792924917707 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.