Although it is a freedom to use tobacco while some people think it should be made illegal as the same way as other drugs. To what extent do you agree or disagree？ What’s your opinion?
Recent decades have witnessed an upsurge in the consumption of tobacco, raising many questions of health hazards. However, I partially disagree with their illegalization of tobacco despite some health problems related
On the one hand, it is true that usage of cigarettes could be fraught with many health hazards. The nicotine substance and other addictive chemicals released from tobacco could make users and many people around more sensitive to many crippling diseases such as diabetes and lung cancer, which is invariably associated with the decline in their life expectancy.
On the other hand, the tobacco prohibition could culminate in some negative consequences. First, Tobacco is proved to be the main source of an excise tax, accounting for the large proportion of total national revenue in both developed and developing nations. In fact, the legislation of tobacco prohibition has contributed to a fall by 5% in Singapore’s GDP, lessening capital investments in many public sectors. In addition, Ban on cigarettes actually is instrumental in the creation of drug cartels. This is implied that the criminalization of tobacco would force users to use other alternative drugs such as marijuana and heroin, which demands a higher degree of drug supply than ever and also leads to more health problems than tobacco.
In conclusion, The prohibition of cigarettes should not be incentivised due to some negative consequences pertaining to decrease in national capital and increase in the consumption of other drugs. However, Users should be aware of many health problems and restrict the consumption for the long-term benefits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, however, if, so, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1394.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48818897638 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0496948374 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566929133858 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.9831331823 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.4 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156448757343 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0631653879955 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0366311096496 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0971627976967 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0255621068766 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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