Your rented accommodation was recently damaged due to bad weather. Write a letter to the landlord and say
- Explain what caused the damage?
- Why do you need them to fix the problem right away?
- What needs to be done to fix it?
I am writing in concerning with the damages that has happened for my rental accommodation because of last night tornado.
As you are aware last night we had a tornado made a lot of devastation in the whole city which my house was not exception and it was impressed a lot. If you come to my house, you can see windows are broken. Furthermore two branches of the tree in front of my house were broken and fell on the entering door of my house. Consequently, the door is twisted and I cannot go out of my house. Unfortunately I got imprisoned.
In this condition, I need immediate repairing. Because, I have no security at all also, all the last night I was scaring. These destructions require a carpenter and a glazer. Carpenter has to measure windows frames to replace with new ones. Besides, he has to repair or change my entering door. Also, a glazer is needed to change windows.
I am look forward to hearing from you.
Sincerely yours,
Mitra riahi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 208, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
... house, you can see windows are broken. Furthermore two branches of the tree in front of my...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, consequently, furthermore, if, look, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 796.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60115606936 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76762136554 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.647398843931 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.5903136141 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 56.8571428571 76.5299724578 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.3571428571 16.8248392259 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35714285714 4.34317383033 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0897995209793 0.216113520407 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0297480546742 0.0766984524023 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0342866415074 0.0603063233224 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.057955138347 0.12726935374 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0231721112301 0.0580467560999 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 8.37731958763 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.51 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.