Many people believe that criminals should be imprisoned; others, however, say they should do unpaid work that is beneficial for the community. Do you agree and disagree? Give your opinion and relevant examples.
As all the people, around the world know, crimes and criminals have uncompensatable effects on society. Criminals o variety of crimes which are adverse for others and endamage them. In some cases, harmed persons cannot make up these losses for ever.
Those who are in favor of criminals should be imprisoned believe that being in prison and having no choice to do anything is the worsen punishment. For instances, they cannot go out or do their works. They are not able to see their families in every time they want. Also, all the time, prison guard controls them and they do not have satisfied facilities. So, when their condemnation period finished and they got free, they will recite these days, consequently, they avoid doing any crime.
The opponents believe that, they should do unpaid work that is beneficial for the country. Because, working have a lot of advantages for both sides. Such as, doing some postponed structural affairs owing to, lack of workforce or money. In this condition, they do not pay any money to anyone and works will be done. Beside these profits, it can be effective for prisoner by putting rewards for them for example, decreasing their prisoning duration if they do their work in best way. As well, they will be skillful in many different courses. As a result, when they got free, they are helpful to the society and will be able to meet their needs of themselves and their families that can be instrumental to prevent more misdeed.
I strongly support recent idea. As I mentioned in the previous lines, it has a lot of good effects on society and people. Additionally due to work pressure and did not gain any money, they never miss the prison and do not commit any crime.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 126, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... and having no choice to do anything is the worsen punishment. For instances, they cannot ...
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Line 5, column 470, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'in the best'.
Suggestion: in the best
...risoning duration if they do their work in best way. As well, they will be skillful in ...
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Line 5, column 517, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
... way. As well, they will be skillful in many different courses. As a result, when they got fre...
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Line 7, column 123, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Additionally,
... of good effects on society and people. Additionally due to work pressure and did not gain a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, if, so, well, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76174496644 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49420977139 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577181208054 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 2.0 0.384769539078 520% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.1369953417 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.8333333333 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5555555556 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290245570952 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10052418762 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0875957767206 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162282713306 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0968436745549 0.056905535591 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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