Some people say that computers have made life easier and more convenient. Other people say that computers have made life more complex and stressful. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Computers are a great technological advance. They have a myriad of benefits such as they save time, store a tremendous amount of information, and help people from all around the world to communicate. On the other hand, computers are a serious threat to the modern society. In my opinion, computers make life complicated. There are a few reasons why I hold this stance.
First of all, because of the computers, people lose their jobs. In the second half of the twentieth century, a sudden proliferation of the computers took place. Owners of large factories started extensive modernization of their businesses. They replaced the hand labor with machines operated by computers programs. Millions of people all around the world lost their jobs. If people are unemployed and can not support their families, life will become incredibly stressful. Despite the opinion of the technophiles (people who support any use of technology) that the invention of the computers have created new professions (software-engineers, programmers), a significant population of people (carpenters, welders) continues losing their jobs. To that end, the unemployment created by the evolution of the computers made the life of many groups of people very difficult.
Second, computers cause a variety of ailments. Office workers, who spend all day staring at a computer screen are at a high risk to become sick. If people did not move enough, they could gain weight. Obesity can lead to diabetes. Complications of diabetes are terrible – some people lose their extremities or die from kidneys insufficiency. People with diabetes have to spend a huge amount of money on medicine to control their blood sugar. It makes their life not only stressful but miserable. Although media agitate people to move actively, visit a gym regularly, and maintain their health, the lion`s share of the office clerks continues to gain weight. So, indirectly, computers decrease life expectancy.
In conclusion, I think that computers definitely make life complex and overwhelming. This is because they increase unemployment and negatively affect people`s health.
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...population of people carpenters, welders continues losing their jobs. To that end...
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...negatively affect people's health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, i think, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1794.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 333.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38738738739 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07417462886 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57957957958 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 559.8 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.9897211657 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.75 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.875 20.6045352989 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45833333333 5.45110844103 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291746531162 0.236089414692 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0829480345103 0.076458572812 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563349740966 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183283355558 0.150856017488 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0384755290897 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.39 10.9000537634 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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