In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.
some people believe that youngsters should have a gap year after they graduated high school for working or visiting some places, others argue not. I would look at its advantages and disadvantages.
It is said that the gap year helps the young because of these reasons. Firstly, taking a job or traveling would support young people to have more knowledge in various aspects than people who do not take them, thus these experiences would be precious weapons for the younger to defeat their competitors in taking a new job or in competitions. Secondly, the gap year would be a chance for young people to do what they want and find out themselves so that they could choose easily which a university suited for them. For example, students who choose a gap year after graduating high school commonly know exactly what they want, who they want to be in the future. Thirdly, taking a non-schooling year gives people to relax and enjoy their lives.
However, a coin has two sides, the gap year would take some of the valuable opportunities in student's study time. For example, if people start studying at the university after graduating high school, they would study more knowledge than others and also finish their studies time earlier. In addition, it is quitely time- consuming and money wasting that taking a gap year while other people are trying to study hard at the university.
In conclusion, having a gap year between finishing high school and starting the university studies takes both plus points and minus points.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, thus, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1264.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8992248062 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53465850172 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538759689922 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.4571345792 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.909090909 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4545454545 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9090909091 7.06120827912 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340661235341 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137027255861 0.084324248473 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635552185318 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212702637621 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.051772111056 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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