Writing task 2 (an essay)
Nowadays most developing countries receive financial aid from international organisations. However, many people believe that help in a form of advice and skills is more important and useful than money. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In this modernized era world has been divided in to two parts one part as a developed countries while others are developing countries. Because of having unequal different technologies some countries escape out from fundamental needs while others are buried in debt and struggling hand to mouth problem. I think providing finance to poorer countries is not good idea to reduce poverty rather than technologies and practicable ideas because of many reasons.
Firstly, there is no sure sent of money goes to them whom are focused because of lack of good leader to distribute equally rather than his own desires. Because which country have such of problem won't be a good leader. That is why providing technologies and ideas plays a vital role to make country develop. By applying different technologies and ideas there would be possible to open different companies to produce different types of goods which can provide job opportunities to local.
secondly, there is no doubt industrial countries people have a far better lifestyle than others countries because of good improvement in economic field. If poorer countries can get technologies and ideas they would apply it for industrial purpose and can get a good improvement so that ideas are more practicable than financial support.
thirdly, if developed countries can make poorer countries as a self dependent will be helped collaborate on research of out of space and to develop the world better than previous some decades because there is no doubt increasing of helping hand will be helped to gain on different fields.
All in all, to make perfect world in every field providing finance to poorer is not good to survive them but there would be a similar develop to make independent world all are possible to provide them technologies and practicable ideas.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 153, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...te equally rather than his own desires. Because which country have such of problem wont...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Secondly
... provide job opportunities to local. secondly, there is no doubt industrial countries...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Thirdly
... practicable than financial support. thirdly, if developed countries can make poorer...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, while, i think, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1524.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13131313131 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78597911823 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511784511785 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.8147392557 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.545454545 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.90909090909 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121949211445 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549772208376 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0323893262387 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0764429184945 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0383301843791 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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