Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with.
What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Childhood is one precious part of human life and it is made vibrant by parents who love to present numerous toys to their little kid. Having lots of gaming equipment are a blessing as a youngster gets the chance to play with diverse items and additionally, they get to know about numerous colors of changed objects. However, giving many options can be damaging for a kid as they cannot distillate on one particular sports for certain periods. I believe that limited toy options are beneficial for little kid.
Primarily, prospect to play with manifold games is always exciting for young boys or girls. For example, playing with a toy car for the extended period of time may be monotonous but if there are options to play with dolls then it may be hilarious. Therefore, it is important to have diversities of toy to make the moment pleasant for little players.
In addition, by playing unalike types of games, a child can learn about altered colors. For instance, a toy car’s color may be red whereas a doll’s color may be green, blue etc. and all these can create dissimilar impact on fledgling mind which important for proper mental development.
On the flip side, various toys can make an undesirable impact on young mind, such as, for having alternatives, a child unlikely to play with single toys. This psychological change is not good for mental expansion because in the long run, they may become too unstable to complete a single task.
In conclusion, it seems that, occasion to play with many toys may create some haphazard on young mind. But, a child should pass their time playing with colorful toys which is expected by every parents. In my opinion, there should be a balance about the quantity of toys which a father and a mother can maintain for the better mental growth of their little angel.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 145, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, still, then, therefore, whereas, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1509.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79047619048 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55770588818 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.5535523621 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.6 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.13333333333 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248420237409 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0964682205706 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0402118052144 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154269129205 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418770137335 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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