Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with . What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys.
Nowadays, children have a chance to receive toys from their parents by many methods, so this phenomenon can bring many benefits for children. However, we should think about some drawbacks which children must face because of having many toys.
On the one hand, there are many positive aspects of having many toys brought up to children. First, it is easy for any one of them to become addicted to technology devices with the popular of its in many families; therefore, having any kind of toys can help them keep away from these devices so that they can have a meaningful life. For instance, after receiving a pack of Lego puzzles, I hear the news that my cousin has reduced his free time playing games on my aunt's smartphone. Moreover, having many toys is a a good chance for them to increase their personalities if they spend a particular time playing with them. Take Rubik as a particular example. Playing it is a helpful way for most of them to raise their imagination and IQ.
On the other hand, it has some drawbacks that children may deal with when having many toys, and one of them is wasting parent's money. Most parents will spend their budget to satisfy their offspring's demand if they feel that the children's need is necessary. But when some children don't protect their toys bought by their parents, it makes them suppose that buying these items can lead to money wastage. Another drawback is that when some parents refuse to buy many toys for their children, it creates not only a conflict between parents and children but also disobeys from any child. For instance, one of the symbols associated with the disobedience of children is that they often steal their parents' money to buy some items for themselves.
To conclude, owning a lot of toys can bring up both pros and cons for children. However, they should think about their circumstances on family finances before persuading parents to buy any one kind of toy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, for instance, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1601.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75074183976 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42483532659 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501483679525 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4506428612 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.733333333 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4666666667 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73333333333 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344267251434 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137612239579 0.084324248473 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677882129101 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229476419369 0.151304729494 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0572961402197 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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