People are buying more and more things that they do not actually need.
How do you think, what are the reasons for this? Is it a positive or negative trend (for an individual and/ or the society overall?)
Purchasing unnecessary artifacts have become a tendency of many contemporary customers. In my opinion, availability of lots of attractive and cheap products are the reasons of this type of situation, which is an unacceptable movement from an individual because in most of time, it effects those people who are in need and in the long run, it will have a holistic undesirable impact on the society.
Eye-catching stuffs and low cost of these products are the typical examples of the excessive procurement related issues that can baffle the consumers to collect those at a time. Nowadays, there are a lot of e-commerce websites are available on the internet, which is designed with various colorful materials, and they offer of an opportunity to look at those items in couple of minutes. To increase the sales, these articles are sold in a discount rate. So, noticeable kits and economical value trigger the buyers to make the collection of unneeded materials.
Individual or society both are affected because of the unconscious nature of having assets. A person generally will become very self-centered, if he wants to have everything from the market. The positive approach of sharing with others will be minimized, which will create a chaos among the people and lead to the unexpected situation, and needy one will not get proper support. Overall, the society has to face difficulty to control its dwellers.
In conclusion, unnecessary investment is always undesirable, specifically, to buy unwanted things as it effects not only the person who is doing it but his society also. I think as a human being of a civilized society, we need to be conscious about this.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 165, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
... person who is doing it but his society also. I think as a human being of a civilize...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, well, as to, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1402.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09818181818 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97661186281 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618181818182 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.4266265146 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.833333333 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9166666667 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141350833766 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0418656406077 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445583399169 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0843244964712 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492617043627 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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