You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that noise may disturb your neighbor.
Write a letter to your neighbor. In your letter:
• introduce yourself
• describe your plans for the party
• invite your neighbor to come
I am Priya and I have recently moved to the house with my family which is opposite to yours. This letter is regarding the party which I have planned to throw on the 10th of June and to invite you to be present at that party.
Since this is the first time our family is moving to a house that we own, we have planned to throw a party for friends, colleges, relatives and neighbours. We have arranged a party to celebrate our happiness, and want to share this special moment with the people we care and love. I have also planned to arrange a music band which would make the event more enjoyable. I hope you do not hate music!
I would feel delighted if you could also appear to this and make it a very special party.
Sorry for any inconvenience it would likely to cause you, but I assure you that I have already made arrangements to make it quite less noisy; by a plan to conduct games for children and keep them engaged and placing a sound proof coverage at the entrance of my house.
Hope you will accept my invitation and enjoy the party!
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...yable. I hope you do not hate music! I would feel delighted if you could also ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 875.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.35323383085 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32663541315 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562189054726 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 284.4 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.634243175 44.8134815571 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.375 76.5299724578 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.125 16.8248392259 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 4.34317383033 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176740103911 0.216113520407 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0840008572535 0.0766984524023 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463324435133 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103382959788 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0314072988317 0.0580467560999 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 8.37731958763 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.25 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.