Dear Mr. Simpson,
I am your next door neighbour Mr. Paul. It has been two weeks since I move into this neighbourhood.
I have dreamt of buying a home for a long time and after years of struggle and hard work, I finally managed to make that become a reality. We, including my friends and relatives, are very excited about this news. So, to celebrate this huge achievement, I am planing to through a party at our place this coming Sunday.
Everyone is really looking forward to this occasion. We are planing to through a BBQ followed by light drinks and snacks. There will be games and some music, where everyone must participate to dance and at the end there will be dinner.
With everyone gathered up in one place, the noise might get bit louder. However, we will try to keep it down as low as possible and if we cause any trouble feel free to let us know.
We will really appreciate if you could attend this party and it will give us chance to get to know each other more.
Sorry for any inconvenience and I am really looking forward to seeing you in the party.
Kind regards
Paul
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, look, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 904.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47524752475 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37398820925 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.663366336634 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.416461972 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.5384615385 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5384615385 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.92307692308 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0873258598402 0.216113520407 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0277948708835 0.0766984524023 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0335791666549 0.0603063233224 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0517771610471 0.12726935374 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453239773337 0.0580467560999 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.57 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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