In recent years, the structure of a family and the role of its members are gradually changing. What kinds of changes can occur? Do you think these changes are positive and negative?
The family pattern has witnessed a good deal of diversification in few past years. Although some of them could have negative effects, in my opinion, change in family organization and member roles can be seen as progress.
As mention below, two main changes in families could be seen as main ones.
First of all, with regard to financial problems of families in these days, it requires a great deal of effort to let only one play the role of breadwinner. This is because in the modern world, only few jobs can provide stable situation for single-earner families, forcing both spouses to be a financial supporter. Furthermore, as a consequence of women’s protest for their rights, they could finally follow their desire to gain better educational and career opportunities. So it could lead to some roles changing between couples and men are now willing to assume responsibilities as a stay-at-home partner to take care of some house hold works.
From my view, these changes have more positive aspects for some reasons. Having the role of breadwinner for both couples can ensure them, this burden would not put unbearable pressure on one only. Also, it could bring the sense of stability for whole family members. Not to mention that role changing is an upward trend and due to that, women could follow their ambitious dreams more independently, so they could be at liberty to do what they desire.
In overall, I believe changing in family hierarchy and some house hold responsibilities, could have more positive aspects. However, these kinds of role shifting should be monitored precisely to avoid any harms on family’s foundation in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, so, first of all, in my opinion, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1387.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97132616487 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75260416538 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594982078853 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6352997987 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.692307692 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4615384615 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.30769230769 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237699347665 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0876312851481 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535966008424 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148390513348 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506258322673 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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